Thursday 27 March 2014

100 Word Challenge Jordan & Katelyn


Dear Paul,
It was Saturday afternoon, I told Tommy to come and see, but he refused to. I begged him but he just wouldn’t come! 

It was soaring over the hills, closer and closer, lights were beaming everywhere. I was shocked, I didn’t know what it was?
I sat in the living room scared to death and Tommy suddenly walked out to the living room to see what was going on and I shouted, “Look up can you see?”. He stood in shock, he started to rise, I screamed for Mum, “HELP!”
But before I knew it he was gone forever! Please help me!!

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